I wrote this poem in 1983 at age 16, for a rather special and misunderstood person. He was very intelligent and warm-hearted, but also terribly introverted. I believe he felt lonely. Compare this poem to An Invitation (1985).
Oh!
You do not fool me
For even a minute –
I can see it clearly
In your eyes
In each sad, experienced line
Of your countenance
That though you and I
Are years apart in age
We are bonded
By one common friend –
Loneliness.
They say
You do not talk
But with me
Your heart pours out
Torrents of words
Thoughts
Visions
You so desperately wished to forget –
But cannot.
Oh!
I know it well –
Your mind
Is still aglow
With old dreams
Promises
Life left barren.
Well, look into my mind –
You can live once more
In your dreams
Through mine.
I have been promised Life –
I can yet save your soul
For I take comfort
In comforting you.
You are a friend
I am not an illusion
I am not one of those dreams
That left your eyes bewildered
When you woke up.
I am the window
Through which sunshine
Can enter
The dark room of your Life –
If only you will hold
My outstretched hand of friendship
And lift the curtains
Of your mind.
Few could escape
The brilliance of my soul
When I willed it.
But sooth, I am compassionate.
I am the promise of Mankind
That you sadly cast aside
Years ago –
I have come back
Not to trouble your soul
But to save it
Before all is over.
Vanita Shukla Hork, 1983
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Et meget meget fantastisk digt, kære Vanita, en dyb, dyb “drømme/livs/drømmelivsvævning”! ❤️❤️ Peer
Thanks so much, Peer and I am really glad you liked the poem! It’s true that it has a dream-like quality.
Astonishing.
Thank you so much, Steve 🙏🙏