I wrote this poem in 1985, 17 years old. The beloved is divinely cold, almost like a statue. Compare the despair in this poem to the pain of unrequited love in Disappointment (1987) and to the disillusionment of Death of a Girl (1984).
Youthful God
Anointed with the tears
Of a youthful heart –
Learn to love
Love fully –
Be impassioned
Not cruel.
Can you give your love
To me
Or must you be divinely
Cold?
Can you remain divine
Or will you crumble
To dust
With false hopes
And foolish dreams?
Are you more
Than a mere man –
Or are you simply
Another God?
Vanita Shukla Hork, 1985
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The theme of many of your poems is youthful love and in deep detail. I find it astonishing that a 17 year old obviously in love can be so emotionally involved. Great words as always Vanita and the meaning well conveyed.
Thank you so much, Steve, I’m very honoured 🙏🌷