I wrote this poem in 1985, 17 years old. It compares the soul to a flame. Just as a flame needs darkness to shine brightly, so is the soul transformed by love, desire, passion and pain. Read also Contemplation (1984), which touches upon the dark night of the soul.
My soul –
Ever like the flame
Of a burning candle
So brilliant, bright
Glorious in the surrounding
Darkness –
My darkness nurtures my soul
The pain melts and
Is transformed into the flame –
And the flame melts into the glow.
Deceptive glow –
Guides the wandering
But consumes itself.
Life –
So sudden, so living
And yet death looms
In the swiftness of a wind
Or a lover’s breath!
How wonderful it would be
To burn forever
And immortalise one’s glow
In another’s eyes!
Even as the flame
Rejoices in its moments
Of greatness
Leaping shadows mock it
To join them.
When the flame is blown into
Memory
The shadows flee with it
Into the unknown.
For what is the flame
Without the darkness
And what is my soul
Without its eternal reality?
Vanita Shukla Hork, 1985
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Love this poem 🕳
Thanks so much, John 🙏
This reminds me of poems I wrote at that age. I think we would have been friends. I love your work so!
Thank you Craig, I’m honoured you enjoy my poems! And yes, I do believe we would have been friends 😊